Friday, October 7, 2011

M1 2011 gooing to EUROPE

 I'm the wolf man an this is me and i got older I'm on my way to Europe to look at all the cool things in Europe right now I'm getting out of the car just got here and the place looks cool.The things that are in Europe are


This is what is in medieval Europe this is cool i was on top of this thing. so
 that was pretty big and tall i was scarred when i was on top of it.

When I'm in Europe there are  lots of things to do" like building a rocket or fighting a mummy or climbing up the Elfie tower. then they said that i was a retard. then after that i went to my great great grandmas house she is old.


But now when i was.


 
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4 comments:

  1. AkeriaSoulOctober 9, 2011 at 5:15 PM

    That was good. Make sure you add alot of details to this mission ok, but otherwise that was a good start.

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  2. UnknownOctober 12, 2011 at 6:07 PM

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  3. UnknownOctober 12, 2011 at 6:15 PM

    I think you might want to work on your punctuation, and use spell check. And maybe consider finishing sentences? Not to be a Debbie-downer, but you might want to check your historical references before you post (like the Eiffel tower was built in 1889, not the 1300's; there were no mummies in medieval times; yes I do like Phineas and Ferb). But overall, I think it was good.

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  4. Mr. FoxOctober 22, 2011 at 5:18 PM

    You are using the wrong meaning of the word retard.

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